August 27, 2010

Would it?

Would life be this interesting
If it was not this complicated?
Without all the intermeshing,
Would there be reasons plenty,
To be elated?
Would an untangled life
Bring on many smiles?
Or would it leave a mark
Of mundane, monotonous
Routine with no spark?

Would life really be interesting
If it was not complicated?
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 27, 2010 at 10:04 PM

    well said....after all 'Life loves the liver of it' - Maya Angelou

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  2. AJAugust 29, 2010 at 3:58 AM

    And Jesse loves the liver on his plate (Yum Yum)-- Jesse S. Sam

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  3. SuchreetAugust 30, 2010 at 3:14 AM

    for neo- thanks for all the appreciation, but may i know who u are?
    and jesse sam can only think of food..only and always!:/

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 1, 2010 at 7:17 AM

    well u cn call me a fan....bt seriously u r a really talented grl ! Dnt knw where u hd disappeared for sucha long time....i was a regular at reading ur creations on various poetry sites b4 u decided to vanish(left u sm msgs but i guess u never visited those sites agn..). Good to hv u bak......keep writin! CHEERS

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