There were days wen i was thin,
and i still thought I was fat!
and now that am not thin anymore,
I remember how less was that fat!!! :(
and I dont know why, but it seems like a venn diagram problem, rather than my very own!
and i still thought I was fat!
and now that am not thin anymore,
I remember how less was that fat!!! :(
and I dont know why, but it seems like a venn diagram problem, rather than my very own!
A few suggestions Suchreet:
ReplyDeleteReplace "...were days..." with "...was a time..."
Replace "thin" with "slim"
Most importantly: Replace "fat" with "mad"
Love....
ReplyDelete....not sucha's post, but jesse bhaiya's comment :)
i feel fat or thin on a daily basis, so "was a time" is out,
ReplyDeleteand thin is not wrong English,
and "fat" with "mad"..ummm..well.. i thought i should write about something thats not apparent.. (since the fat gets covered under the layers of winter clothes)!
and now shut up! ur.. both, not allowed to say anything further!!
Rit calm down :P
ReplyDeleteI was jus tryin 2 tease u; thanx 4 makin it a big success.